First all plot! Hello! it is the fundamental of all books! you need a story, yes, there is sex and lots of it some good, some boring cause that's all they do. I agree that it is a D&S book to a point but as many people have not realized but problems don't just vanish or are solved in less then a month ( yes that is the most the two main characters have been together from first sight to nearly all problems solved). The pacing of the book is slow, there is no conflict.. the main girl agrees to anything the man wants with out really thinking, even though she is so post to be smart.. she sure doesn't use her brain. The build up of any form of antagonist would have been great having an antagonist at all would be good. There is no internal conflict not even really internal, no big plot no big bad guy nothing. It pained me to think this was so post to be some great books. Ya right. maybe I should publish my own stories all I need is a great editor as I'm horrible at grammar and spelling.
I feel like I wasted my small break from quitting my job to start job hunting but in the end it is my own fault for never being able to not finish a book. Well enough with the ranting at utter nonsense that I am writing now. I'm quite sure after I post this I will go back and read this and think what the hell was I trying to say?
Back to this weekend I had a blast at SFU summer fest! Lots of new drawing in my sketch book but I want to finish some up before posting and showing my new doodles! And don't forget to come Aug 1st to The Cultch for our book launch it is from 6-8pm and the rest of the time we will have a gallery of comic pages for sale and books of other artist! Please come it will be awesome!
The Cultch
1895 Venables Street
Vancouver, BC V5L 2H6
Cloudscape Comics – Cirrus
Aleese Nessler
July 31st, 2012 - September 3rd, 2012
Opening August 1st, 6:00pm - 8:00pm
http://www.thecultch.com/content/view/78/148/
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